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How to Write a Personal Statement

Specific stories over generic claims — the structure that actually moves application readers.

What you'll learn

  • Specific stories vs generic claims
  • Arc structure
  • Avoiding cliché openings
  • Revision approach

The mistake most students make

Generic opening ('Since childhood I've been fascinated by...'). Strong statements open with a specific moment that established the trajectory.

How Fennie helps

Fennie reviews personal statements against the specificity and arc-coherence criteria readers actually use.

Step by step

  1. 01Brainstorm specific moments — 5-10 concrete stories
  2. 02Pick 1-2 that demonstrate growth or commitment
  3. 03Open with the most specific moment, not a generic claim
  4. 04Connect to specific programs and faculty in body
  5. 05Revise mercilessly — first drafts are universally weak

FAQ

How long should it be?

Strictly to the word/character limit. Going over signals inability to edit.

Should I mention specific faculty?

Yes for grad school and many fellowships. Skip for general undergrad apps (won't read it personally).

Does Fennie review personal statements?

Yes — Fennie reviews against application-specific rubrics with concrete feedback.

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